Ana Lisa

Wow, that was amazing. But it was the laast stanza: "And it is here I see the rose of my life, my blood its peddles, my body the stem, the ...

I like it, but I would have changed the genre b/c it didn't sound lyrical to me.

I agree with Blondie05998 or somethin like that. IT was really good and i like the flow of the words. I just wanna know what gave you a reason to ...

I liked it, the way that you described the anger anliked it, and frustration of the soldier in the war. I really hope that you write more like this one. ...